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2008/06/04 Main show

Post  GM Beach on Sat May 31, 2008 10:09 pm

http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/vedi_show.asp?id=1811


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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  GM Beach on Mon Jun 02, 2008 6:32 pm

Matches:

Welcome to S.W.E!
Opening match (The Barnsley Chop vs The Wild Thing)
<Segment>
Tag match of the evening. (Spirit Hobo and Mac Daddy McShagnasty vs Wierd Willie and Rat71)
<Segment>
Underground Brawler title shot! (Zhang Fei vs FCYakuza)
<Segment>
Showing off lightweights in Tag match.. (keiji and G T O vs Taloncarde and Roberto12)
<Segment>
That fat bloke makes his stand.. (Mr. Smackdown vs That fat bloke taking up 3 seats)
<Segment>
S.W.E belt contending.. (Tremere vs bambidoodle)
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The Dark Reaper strikes.. (The Dark Reaper vs UltimatePasquale)
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Gm's Match..(Beach vs Ranma Saotome)
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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  GM Beach on Tue Jun 03, 2008 4:31 pm

thanks you all for the submissions of segments so far Smile all is good that you send in! Im happy as long as I get Something from you Smile well tomorrow is the show, there are still some spot left for sending in segments so dont hesitate sending something in.

I may not have been all too clear to newcomers what a segment is supposed to be. I will write some some guiding to this later, and which style I would prefer that you send them in, nothing big, details Smile
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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  GM Beach on Wed Jun 04, 2008 2:23 pm

All segments done now. tonight we have a show! Enjoy!
Please write all constructive criticism about the show here Smile
And if you want rematches if you loose or another chance to redeem yourself, then RP it Smile
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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  GM Beach on Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:43 am

My apologies for the error in the match card, where a tag team first had their match, when the warmup for the match. I thought I double-checked everything before I submitted it. Triple-checking it from now on Smile The scheduling process is weird and sometimes things change place randomly.
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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  Guest on Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:12 am

GM Beach wrote:My apologies for the error in the match card, where a tag team first had their match, when the warmup for the match. I thought I double-checked everything before I submitted it. Triple-checking it from now on Smile The scheduling process is weird and sometimes things change place randomly.

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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  Guest on Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:30 am

Whooo, that was a really good show, especially for a debut. High end feuds are poised for the long haul and the Tag Matches were really incredible.

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Post  Guest on Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:36 am

Hey don't take any of this personal I'm going to point out the stuff that I noticed.

1. I think we need a better banner, the Sleeze just isn't cutting it for me. That said the intro was pretty spot on.

2. Silly show takes too F'n long we're just past Stuttering Steve's introduction.

3. The dividers you chose are great. Personally I like having diffent ones but that's a matter of preference.

I can't beleve I lost, I always loose on shows, even matches that I'm really heavily favored to win. Oh well I wasn't that interested in belts anyway I just wanna rp and have fun.

Over all I give it a solid 6.5 out of ten. And most of that is just that we haven't been active just yet, still learning and all that other stuff.

A tip I never quite mastered for various reasons is that the sooner a match card is hinted at the sooner we can get to work on RP for the show. Good show though.

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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  GM Beach on Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:18 am

Thanks Ranma for the compliment.

Tremere, I agree on the banner, my Vice gm is better than me at graphics and is going to create a better banner Smile
Alright, is 1 segment between each match + starter and ending segment too much? or just too long segments?
Dividers seemed to fit yeah, at the moment I stick with just 1 divider, but later I might improve/add variety.
I know shocking that you lost, huh?

I try getting a match card for wednesdays at the sunday/monday before. Need to see before who are feuding in hte RP threads and things like that.

Anyone else got suggestions or something to add?
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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  Guest on Thu Jun 05, 2008 6:06 am

I did think that there were a few too many segments. I think a better format would be -Match-Match-Segment. That's my opinion

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Post  Guest on Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:39 pm

It kinda depends. I like match segment match. But that's a matter of opinion. If you wanna go match match though it won't hurt because between adding the pictures to the intros and the divider you're matches won't bleed together.

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Post  UltimatePasquale on Fri Jun 06, 2008 2:31 am

The show is good and the tag match are so nice.I only hope of winning my next match Smile
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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  Guest on Fri Jun 06, 2008 8:18 am

This is my first fed, and in all honesty, not a huge fan of wrestling, just UFC, but I think you did good. TO get an idea of what to expect, I picked a couple of random shows from other feds to watch, ranging from nothing but the fights (boooring) to the extremes (commentary through the entire fight, etc) and I defiantly like what you did considering your time restraints Razz Keep up the good work!

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Re: 2008/06/04 Main show

Post  GM Beach on Fri Jun 06, 2008 8:24 am

thank you talon. My goal is to have a good blend between storytelling and action. Matches get much more interesteing if there is a reason behind the fight Smile But too much segments and talk is also just slow to go through Smile

Gonna stick with "segment match segment" bit for now, but with occasional "match match" if there are long segments. First show had some really long segments heh. I dont know how the vice gm wants his "Rock Show" to be done yet tho.
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